[you would be insane if you wrote these out anyway, how often are you from a canon where your character's important moments happen in a 4 minute music video with montages. i understood it, i just didn't want her to leap too far.
anyway, she will put an arm on his shoulder because that seemed really rough to see. even if he's not sure how to feel about it, it would be awful to watch him die like that and know it was for his sake.]
Don't be sorry. That must have been really horrible. You grew up together?
[ you're so right and i'll never write a fic again. he startles a little, out of it, but will touch her hand after. ]
Y-Yeah. We were at the same school. [ the feelings here are complicated, but not wholly negative. his not-love life is a disaster. ] I still don't know what he was thinking, but... It's not like I was even trying to win at that point.
[ he had totally given up on the competition that round for other reasons. grouchily, to dodge The Feelings, ] Some people just do whatever they want and never explain anything.
[she gets it. feelings are hard. sometimes a boy just makes out with you and then kills himself in front of you to change the trajectory of your life even though you were busy being het and you just have to find a way to deal with that.]
That's true. Would it have been better if he had explained?
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anyway, she will put an arm on his shoulder because that seemed really rough to see. even if he's not sure how to feel about it, it would be awful to watch him die like that and know it was for his sake.]
Don't be sorry. That must have been really horrible. You grew up together?
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Y-Yeah. We were at the same school. [ the feelings here are complicated, but not wholly negative. his not-love life is a disaster. ] I still don't know what he was thinking, but... It's not like I was even trying to win at that point.
[ he had totally given up on the competition that round for other reasons. grouchily, to dodge The Feelings, ] Some people just do whatever they want and never explain anything.
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That's true. Would it have been better if he had explained?